• they were a little quiet
  • the Michael two voice was annoying
  • were heard a few stutters
  • Michael one could've been more fluent with his lines.
  • Michael one was more reciting of his lines.


  • His hand were in the same general position through out the piece
  • His positions never changed drastically
  • He was looking away from the camera a lot
  • He should've put his hands up to represent a microphone.
  • Sean and Jimmy's voice were pretty much the same.






  • He can't talk that fast.
  • Bad facial expressions.
  • Could've done better hand movements.
  • (This is from Adam) This was a bad performance on my part.